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For years, the locals had warned everyone about the old house at the edge of Pinewood Forest. No one had lived there in decades — windows boarded up, the garden swallowed by wild vines, and a rusted gate that creaked even when there was no wind.
I never believed in ghost stories. So when my friends dared me to spend one night there for a video project, I agreed without hesitation. Armed with a camera, a flashlight, and way too much confidence, I drove down the narrow forest road as the sun began to set.
The house looked worse up close. Cracked walls, a sagging roof, and a front door that hung slightly open — as if someone had left in a hurry and never came back. The air smelled of damp wood and something faintly metallic, like old blood.
Inside, dust covered everything. Furniture sat exactly where it had been left, as if frozen in time. A grandfather clock in the hallway had stopped at 3:17. I filmed everything, narrating for my video, trying to sound braver than I felt.
Around 9 PM, I set up my sleeping bag in the living room and started a small fire in the fireplace. The forest outside was eerily quiet — no owls, no wind, nothing.
At exactly 11:47 PM, the grandfather clock started ticking again.
I froze. The clock hadn't worked when I first checked it — no battery, gears rusted solid. But now it was ticking, steady and loud, echoing through the empty house.
Then I heard footsteps. Slow, deliberate, coming from the floor above. I grabbed my camera and pointed it toward the staircase, my heart pounding. The footsteps stopped right at the top of the stairs.
"Hello?" I called out, my voice shaking.
Silence. Then, a child's laughter — soft, distant, but unmistakably coming from upstairs.
I told myself it was an animal, or my imagination, or anything other than what it sounded like. But then I saw her.
At the top of the stairs stood a little girl in an old, faded white dress, her hair covering her face. She wasn't moving, just standing there, staring down at me through strands of dark hair.
"I'm sorry," I whispered, backing toward the door. "I didn't mean to intrude. I'll leave—"
"You can't leave," she said, her voice layered, like multiple voices speaking at once. "Nobody leaves. Not until they find what's under the floor."
The lights — the few that worked — flickered violently. The fire in the fireplace turned an unnatural shade of blue. And the front door, which I had left open, slammed shut on its own.
I ran toward it anyway, pulling with all my strength. It wouldn't budge. Behind me, the girl's laughter grew louder, joined by other voices — adults, children, all overlapping, all coming from different parts of the house at once.
Then I heard scratching beneath the floorboards. Right under my feet.
Something was trying to get out.
The wooden planks beneath me began to crack, splinter, and the smell of rot and decay rushed up through the gaps. I stumbled back just as a pale, decayed hand burst through the floor, fingers grasping at the air where my foot had been seconds before.
I don't remember how I got out. I just remember running through the forest in complete darkness, branches tearing at my clothes, the sound of that laughter chasing me the entire way.
When I finally reached my car and drove away, I looked back one last time. The house stood silent, dark — except for one window on the second floor.
The little girl was standing there, watching me leave.
And she was smiling.
When I got home and reviewed the camera footage for my project, everything from 11:47 PM onward was missing. Just static. Except for one frame, near the very end — a clear shot of the living room floor.
Written in the dust, in small, childlike handwriting, were three words:
"COME BACK SOON."
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